Reworking the script...

I like this part. After I've written the first draft I like to take a step back from it for awhile so that I can identify potential problems a little easier and incorporate new ideas at a later point. I feel that I've got enough notes at this point to move on to character design, so I'll hopefully be posting some of those up later on.

Also, I was looking more into the rhyming aspect of writing. I'm a little worried that I'd be giving myself a pretty difficult task, and that the rhyming aspect will lose it's appeal as the age range increases to include older children (if we're going to go through with various stories for this little girl). So I watched this...

And then I read this...

How To Write a Rhyming Picture Book and Get it Published — Part 1: A Writer’s Perspective

So for now I'm going to take another step back from the scripting so that I can create some characters. Last time I found that just drawing the characters helped shape the narrative in ways that I hadn't necessarily thought about in the beginning. Let's crack on!